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In a city packed with talent, ambition, and students who’ve already published their first novel (or so it feels), standing out in your admissions essays takes more than decent grammar and a life lesson. Whether your child is aiming for Columbia, an Ivy League, or one of New York’s top private schools, their writing has to hit the mark.
At Cardinal Education, we help NYC families turn half-formed ideas into essays that actually stick with admissions officers. No templates. No filler. Just smart, honest storytelling that sounds like your student, only sharper.
You thought middle school drama was a lot? Welcome to private school admissions in New York. Here, schools aren’t just looking for top scores or piano prodigies. They want personality, thoughtfulness, and yes, a strong command of the semicolon. That’s where the essays come in. Here’s what you’ll likely see:
These are the “here’s who I am” pieces. Your child might be asked about a challenge they’ve faced, a book that shaped them, or how they’ll contribute to a school community. Think 250 to 500 words of storytelling with heart—and a solid conclusion.
Surprise! You’re up too. Most schools ask parents to reflect on their child’s strengths, values, and why this school feels like the perfect match. It’s basically a heartfelt pitch with a strategic twist.
Things like “What’s your favorite tradition?” or “Describe someone you admire.” These look easy but still need voice, clarity, and a little charm. No emoji answers, please.
Optional in name only. These are prime real estate for extra context, special talents, or moments that didn’t fit elsewhere. If the box is there, use it well.
Some schools want to see a piece of writing your child already completed in school—preferably one with a teacher’s comments. It shows how your child writes under normal classroom conditions, not just after a tutoring boot camp.
Many top New York schools—like Horace Mann, Riverdale, or The Spence School—may require a timed writing exercise through Test Innovators. It’s not scored, but admissions officers are definitely reading it, so it counts.
Here are some top schools in New York that require the completion of an essay or writing assessment in their application requirements:
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Each of these programs supports a different piece of the admissions puzzle. Whether it’s building confidence, sharpening skills, or learning how to tell your story, they’re designed to work together and meet students where they are.
If your child has a Proctored Writing Sample coming up, don’t panic—get prepared. New York families turn to us when they want more than a practice prompt and a pep talk.
We help students walk into their writing sample, cool, calm, and ready to roll. Here’s what our prep includes:
And the best part? It’s not just about a test. It’s about helping students find their voice and share real ideas clearly and quickly.
If your child has something to say but isn’t sure how to say it, we’re here to help. Let’s turn that blank page into a story admissions officers won’t forget.
Nope, not all of them. Some New York schools love the proctored writing sample, especially the ones working with Test Innovators. Others? Not so much. It really depends on the school’s admissions philosophy. Schools like Riverdale, Horace Mann, and The Spence School often use it to see how your child writes under time pressure, with no help from Grammarly, ChatGPT, or Mom.
However, many schools still lean on student essays or graded work instead. Always check each school’s specific requirements, because assuming every school wants the same thing is like thinking every pizza place in New York uses the same crust. They don’t.
Student essays are the polished, well-fed, beautifully dressed versions of your child’s writing. They’re the kind you edit, revise, and sometimes agonize over for days. On-demand writing samples, on the other hand, are the pajama-wearing, caught-off-guard cousins. These are written during a timed session, often via Test Innovators, with a prompt your child sees for the first time and only 30 minutes to respond. No edits, no re-dos—just raw thinking on the page. Both give admissions officers insight, but one shows what your child can do with time and help, while the other reveals how they think on their feet.
Generally, yes. The older your child, the more writing they’re expected to produce. Middle school applicants usually get shorter prompts, fewer essays, and sometimes a single statement about who they are or what they enjoy. High school applicants, though? They’re often writing multiple essays, tackling big questions, and are expected to show deeper self-reflection and stronger writing mechanics.
Some high schools even ask for graded essays or optional supplements. The good news is, younger students aren’t penalized for being, well, younger. Admissions teams know the difference between a 5th grader and a 9th grader—and they’re not looking for a college thesis from either.
Yes… But tread carefully. While some schools ask broad questions that lend themselves to repurposing, others want very specific responses. Reusing an essay word-for-word is fine if the prompt is nearly identical, but always double-check that it actually answers the question being asked. You don’t want to submit a heartfelt letter about why your child loves chess… to a school that asked about a favorite community tradition.
Also, personalization matters. Schools can spot a generic “copy-paste” job a mile away. So sure, reuse the bones if they’re solid—but dress them up a little differently depending on who’s coming to dinner.
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